SciFi and Fantasy Stories: We gather at the stones
This story is inspired by this picture here in elfwood by John Teall. The story is about dragon-like creatures, and a circle of stones. It is supposed to take place in medieval times, I hope I haven't mixed up the historic facts too much.
It was still night, but soon it would be a chilly morning. It was the
silence before the birds woke and filled the air with their songs. Silence
didn't mean nothing was awake, though. If you looked carefully, you could
see a large shadow, moving swiftly from shelter to shelter. Now and then it
was visible in the gap between two rocks or leaving the shadows of a
tree. Although it was large and apparently in a hurry, it didn't disturb
the silence. As a shadow it raced on, careful not to make a sound, and
careful to hide itself as much as possible. These abilities were the only
reason it was still alive. It crossed a plain, and shortly the creature
could be seen in its entirety: a large body, four short swift legs, a long
neck, and a upright tail. One moment the light of the moon reflected on its
scales, then it hid again in the shadows of an earth wall.
He was nearly there! He marched along the earth wall to the opening in the
northeast and entered the outer ring. Within it, a circular group of
stones were visible, which were built in the shape of ports. Between the
ports were shadows, just as he was. Their body had a great diversity of
shapes, still it was clear they belonged together and were waiting for
something, silently. He took his place between the stones and waited, too.
The sky got brighter and brighter and finally the red sun rose and hit the
announcement stone. A creature with two humps and a small long neck looked
up and said:
"At this holy time and place, I am proud to open the 16,384th
meeting. Once this meeting was a happy event. A time to see old friends, to
reunite with family members who lived far away. We were many then, and
powerful. Now, we are few and we have to hide. This meeting has become a sad
event, with sad news. Prodh, will you please tell us what happened to
Blanik?"
Another one bowed her neck.
"Yes, o Nestor, I will. We lived in a system of caves in the hills of the central mainland.
We lived there happy and undisturbed for ages. One afternoon, we heard the sound of trumpets,
the clanging of steel. A large group of human approached our mountain. They didn't look very good,
those humans. They were with many, but they were tired and some of them
badly injured. They wanted to seek shelter in our caves! I said to
Blanik: 'come, let's go and hide somewhere else. They will be gone soon,
and then we can return. I talked and talked, and finally she admitted, but
not whole hearted. We went and hid in the land nearby. A few nights later I
heard screams and trumpets again from the direction of the mountain. I
looked for Blanik, but I couldn't find her, and feared the worst. The
screams died and the trumpets sounded triumphant, so I knew it was done.
That was about half a year ago, and since then I wander around, sneaking
from shadow to shadow. I can't live there anymore."
"Thank you for your report, Prodh. Now, let us remain silently for a minute
in memory of our dear friend and family member." At first there was some
shuffling of feet, then the place was silent. Silent, as if there weren't a
few dozens of large creatures assembled. The stones stood grim in the grey
morning light, with the various obscure shapes between them. Even nature
itself was silent: the birds were mute, and no insects were humming. The
sun rose higher and moved on along its path in the sky. As soon as the beam of the sun
hit the next stone, Nestor took the word again. With trembling voice he started:
"Now we have to take some action. For a long time we indulged in our
superiority, but the world has changed. We are no longer dealing with only
small animals, easy prey that isn't worth bothering about. No, for the
first times since our battle of the early days and our unity, we have an
enemy. This enemy is smart and sly. It has become numerous and it got a
large influence on the world around us. They used to have respect for us,
but they haven't anymore. Once they fought us with their greatest warriors,
and still tell tales about that ancient murders. Nowadays, however, they
just drive us out of our homes and kill us if we are in their way, just out
of convenience. These humiliations culminated in the actions of one of
their sorcerers called Merlin. As you may remember, he got Pyrrhus and
Nixus under his control and made them fight just for a sign for some
human king! We are few, and they are many. We should have taken action
earlier, but we are not late yet. So, what are we going to do to avert this
threat, to keep our species alive?"
Immediately two relative young creatures took the word. Although there was
a big physical difference between them, they were alike in thoughts. They
had been friends since they had occupied caves on opposite sides of a small
sea-lane, and probably before.
"Let us kill...", Scylla started.
"...them all", Charybdys continued.
"We must..."
"...teach them a lesson".
"And how, exactly, are you going to do that?", Storsjöodjuret, one of the
older attendants, asked sweetly. "After all, we are with a few tens and they
are with millions." Scylla and Charybdys thought about this for a while,
before they continued with their odd way of speaking:
"We have to..." "...wipe out land..." "...after land, village..." "...after village." "We
smoke them..." "...out..." "...of their pretty..." "...houses. We do it
at..." "...night when..." "...they sleep and are..." "...not alert". Now
others joined in; Cosanostras said:
"Let's start with their cities first. Those are their centres of power, like we
have one of ours here. That's were we should strike! Kill them, I say!"
Many cheers and bravos were heard, before Nestor managed to get them silent.
Storsjöodjuret took the word again:
"I'm sure that would make many victims among them, but also among us. And we cannot
allow ourselves to get killed."
"Pah, we are su..." "...perior!", the Scylla and Charybdys choir interrupted.
"Order, order", Nestor said, "This is a plan. In my opinion, it isn't a
very good plan, but it's a plan at least. Are there any others?
Storsjöodjuret?" Storsjöodjuret bowed her head.
"Thank you, chairman. Yes I've another plan", she said, while her eyes sparkled, "Why should we risk
our precious lives? Why should we fight them?", she made a short
pause for a dramatic effect. She looked around, and noticed that some of
the smarter ones already guessed the answer. She continued:
"I say, let them fight each other! Let them fight their precious wars! Let them
slaughter, and drench the fields in blood, their blood! It's a pity
those Romans aren't alive anymore."
"Yes, they were deli..."
"shhh" Storsjöodjuret looked angrily at the interrupter. She went on:
"because they were good at killing. But there are other powerful nations rising. Let them
fight each other, while we sit back in our lakes and caves, relax and have
a drink. They will destroy themselves, after which we will rule once more."
And everyone will remember the genial idea of Storsjöodjuret, she added
for herself.
There was silence again, and they were astonished. Slowly the feet started
shuffling, the first voices began to whisper. This whispering evolved into
a dimmed but chaotic conversation, now and then interrupt by a "Kill
the..." "...humans". Finally Nestor took the word again.
"Ladies and gentlemen, the idea of the just heard proposal is new to us, but quite
appealing, to sit back in my lake and wait until humanity has exterminated
itself, and no one calls me 'Nessie' again". He shivered at the word, the
rest of the assembly grinned.
"However, there are several parts of the plan which have to be discussed.
The most important is: how do we let the humans kill each other on a sufficiently large scale?"
"I have thought about that", Storsjöodjuret replied, "we must somehow influence their major
organizations."
"Does someone know such an organization?", Nestor asked the
group. A neck rose hesitantly. "Yes, Ardax?" A shy voice answered: "I, eh,
have heard about something called, eh, religion. I noticed that if humans
are summoned to do things in name of the religion, they'll do it, no matter
if it's burning, destroying or killing."
"Thank you, Ardax, for your worthwhile comments. That will be one group, but we
still need a second one. Any ideas?"
"Not all hu..." "mans taste a..." "...like or look alike."
"Therefore we..." "...think that..." "...they have..." "...also diffe..."
"...rent reli..." "...gions.", Scylla and Charybdys said.
"But how can we reach them?", someone shouted. "We must influence the leader of these
groups. We can whisper something to them when they sleep. We can act and
make it look like a sign for them. Without getting killed, of course."
"We only have to influence one group. Once they attack, the rest will be solved automatically.",
Storsjöodjuret added.
"Ok, we will make an action plan. Prodh and Svalbar, I want you to prepare
a nice religious sign. It must become an extraordinary piece of theatre.
Andrehzes, you have a very pertinent voice, a voice they will listen to in
their sleep. To you the honour to do the influencing thing."
"We will be..." "...outposts and..." "...report when it..." "...starts.", Scylla and
Charybdys said. Nestor continued:
"And you, Ardax will stay here as our religious advisor. All others, keep contact!
Now I will close the meeting."
The sun was already high in the sky, and nearly touched the first signal stone.
The shadows became shorter, and it got warm. It was time for them to hide once more,
but now it was different. They would strike back, and how! They would teach
them a lesson. Full with hope and excitement, most of them went back to
their homes: caves, lakes, dense forests and other out-lying places that
can't be easily investigated by humans.
*
The king woke up, confused, because he had dreamt. It was not a normal
dream, he was sure about that. He thought it was a sign from god, since he
was a pious man. He was eager to finish his breakfast and other morning
rituals, to talk with his advisors.
"Gentlemen", he said, "This night we dreamt, and it was so realm, so convincing, We believe
it was a sign from the Almighty."
"Tell us about thy dream, sire, and let me try to explain it." The king was pleased he
could finally tell his dream, and he was also pleased that he didn't have to force
his advisors to listen.
"We dreamt that ugly creatures, lead by the ugliest of all, came out of the earth and went
out over the lands. They were real monsters, dragons, evil and horrible.
Finally they reached the holy land, and started to deceive the hearts of
its inhabitants. Then they began to destroy it."
The religious advisor bowed deep.
"Ah, sire, this is truly a sign from God." He touched his crucifix. "I have heard
about evil men with daggers and turbans who have conquered the holy land and are
desecrating it. Thou must do thy holy duty and kick them out of the holy land, to regain
it for God and Christianity."
"Yes, sire, that would be an excellent idea.", the military advisor added. "Our soldiers trained
hard for combat, and are eager to fight. It is the most noble goal for us to fight for our king and
our God!"
That afternoon, when the royal hunt was over, they went past a deserted
castle. Suddenly, a large green dragon appeared on top of the castle walls
shouting once, challenging. This was the sign for a second dragon, which
emerged from the shadows nearby and started to attack the castle. This one
was beautiful silvery and white. It hammered with its tail on the walls, and
tried to rip stones out of the walls with its claws. And although the
dragon on the castle wall tried to defend it by throwing rocks down and
crying evilly, the walls slowly crumbled down. Finally the walls were no
more than a pile of rock, and the white dragon climbed on it. The green
one screamed more violent than ever, but was pushed off the castle by the
white one. For a moment, the white dragon stood triumphant on the top of
the castle, while the sun reflected on its silver-white scales. Then, one
moment later, both had disappeared, and all that remained from the action
was a big pile of rumble.
The royal procession had looked at it with open mouth.
"Let us explain, sire", one of the advisors said, "the white dragon, that are we, and the green
dragon, that are they. The castle symbolizes the holy land. Thou hath to attack the holy land
to drive them out, and victory will be thine." The king had reached a decision. He proclaimed:
"Let the crusade begin!"
Hehe, this is excellent! I especially like how you used existing dragons and monsters... scylla and charybdys from the greek mythology, and of course Storsjöodjuret from Sweden =) The crusade part was also nice. Hmm, what else do I have to say.. *thinks* Nothing I guess.. there might have been some bad things, but I must have been laughing too much to notice them =DOh, you are from Sweden, right? Couldn't you Swedish people have given it a pronouncable name?
Hehe, "Storsjöodjuret" IS pronounceable... "stor" means big, "sjö" means lake, and "Storsjön" is a large lake somewhere far north. And "odjur" simply means beast.
...Jacob, your number one supplier of useless information that you didn't even know that you didn't want to know...Thanks for the information, Jacob. So now I'm having a 'big lake beast' in my story *Orders another pile of useless info*
Once upon a time when the world was very young and organized monotheism was yet to be invented men and dragons did not yet fear or hate one another - but went to them for advice - but that is another story and you tell yours quite well - and i am honored that you found inspiration in an immage of mine - each of us sees with our own eyes - and yes there may indeed be outside influences in present conflicts and not the ones fanatics of any flavor immagine - this is a good point. We live in a far stranger and more wonderous universe then we could possibly imagine - even what the wildest among us imagine ourselves to be may not be the half of it ... ~Your story could easily precede mine: first men and dragons lived in harmony, and men asked them for advice. Gradually they becamse strangers to each other... The world is very strange indeed. Poor world. Aargh, it's one big conspiracy... ;-)
Your story is a valid interpretation and somewhat like the way i often think too - and the kind of cautionary tale folks do need to be reminded especialy it seems these days - one good thing - instead of one big conspiracy there's really lots and lots of little and medium size conspiracys and it's almost funny the way they stumble over each other - of course it would be a lot funnier if more of the consiquences weren't so serious but the wonderful redeamingness of diversity is that for all it's warts there's a zillion times more of everything else - well everything chainges and chainges again - maybe someday men and dragons can be friends - there may even still be places and hearts where spirit straingeness is seen as friendly and welcome ... ~
Nice story, with an unusual twist. I like it very much. There is just one minor nit I have to pick. It says, "One afternoon, we heard the of trumpets, the clinging of steel." I am missing a word here, and 'clinging' usually means 'holding tight onto something' (like a monkey to the tree, or a nice tight t-shirt ;-) ). The sound is usually represented by 'clanging', though there's other words one can use as well.I really like the names you used... Most of all the Nestor -> Nessie bit. That had me smiling... Thanks for you comment and pointing out my mistakes. Arrgh, all those typos. Indeed, I forgot the word 'sound'. That's the kind of thing a spellingchecker doesn't find. I'll change it ASAP Clinging seems to be a 'Dutchism'. (hmm, it looks like no smiley at all doesn't work) 11-11-01: It has been fixed.
3 Jan 2002
Alfrieda Louise Riemke de Haas
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Oh, about the historic facts... nothing I could see. But... I think the crusades started on invitation of Byzantium... or was that just one of the crusades.. Oh well, if it doesn´t bother be, it couldn´t bother anyone else either.
3 Jan 2002
Alfrieda Louise Riemke de Haas
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Well, that was certainly the coolest take on that bit of history I´ve ever read. Especially all the monsters... I know only three of them, so where did you get the rest? It´s a pity there are typos and wrong words in it. (Don´t mean to be harsh or anything, but did you translate this from Dutch? Especially in the beginning there are a bunch of words which would indicate that.. like earth wall. It´s supposed to be an 'aarden wal' right?) Oh well, the story itself is really great and if you like I think I can correct the language for you. By the way, I think this is the first really finished story I´ve read here... that´s good. It´s probably because everybody knows what´s going to happen next. I really like it. Marius Ernst replies: "Yip yip yay! You returned!Well, there's the monster of Loch Ness (Nestor/Nessie), the Big Lake Beast from Sweden, Scylla and Charybdys from the Greek mythology. The rest I just made up. (Pyrrhus and Nixus are dervied from Greek and Latin words for fire and snow, Blanik is a mountian in the Czech Republic, Andrehzes is derived from the name of a Dutch singer, the others are quite arbitrarily)There are more (European) monsters available, but I needed them alive, that was the biggest problem. If someone knows one, please tell me!If you want to correct my English, great! I know mine is not perfect. (I can send you a version where the dialogues and most typo's are fixed)It is quite known indeed what happens next. And in the mean time, the dragons are still waiting... Glad you liked it."
Weee, you use a lot of description, which I like. Don'tuse words like suddenly, immediately and such too often, they are ug-lehe-y. Anywho, I enjoyed reading this, especially since it was more or less based on stories and myths from our very own European cultures like the Greek and Swedish... it was swedish, I think *ponders* well to be safe let's say Scandinavian.
Well written. I'm impressed. Marius Ernst replies: "Ugly, but I like those words! Maybe I do use them too often, it's good to hear it. One of the monsters is from sweden, quite correct. I actually did some research for this one . Thanks for your comment"
6 Jun 2003
Ari Rahikkala
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I guess Neal Stephenson was right in Snow Crash. The moment I saw the number 16384 I thought: Hey, that's a power of two (namely 2^14)... Nerds! Nerds! Nerds!
I have to confess that I didn't quite understand the story itself. I didn't really see the importance of the crusade, and the white and green dragons... nor the significance of their connection with the rest of the story... Marius Ernst replies: "Uh, ok, I'll try to explain. What I intended to write is that the dragons set up the humans to fight amongst each other and destroy themselves, after which the dragons can rule the world again. The stuff with the white and green dragon is a piece of theatre to give the christian humans the final push to fight the non-christian humans, for the above-mentioned purpose."
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